Monday, September 6, 2010

*sigh*

Does anyone even READ my chapters!? I got no comments on Chapter 5 or on the book cover... :( What's the point of writing this if no one reads it? :( :( :( Please, I won't continue unless I get at least 3 comments on THIS post. It would be nice to also see some comments on the last two posts...

Monday, August 23, 2010

Book Cover!

Hey, I made a Book cover for this story! Hope you all like it and comment please!

Monday, August 9, 2010

Chapter 5-Breaking

Foxsong yawned, and stretched. His vision had soon gone back to normal, along with Wolfstar's hearing. Now it was time for the Gathering, and Foxsong couldn't wait to go. He heard Wolfstar calling the clan together outside to get going. He padded out of the Warriors Den, and nodded at the cats who were going, then, they set out.

When they got there, they snarled as they saw that FlameClan were there. The ruthless clan had always attended Gatherings, though all clans disagreed about it. Foxsong sniffed the air again, and noticed that they were the last to come. DuskClan and SageClan were already here. His eyes brightened, and he searched the crowd of SageClan. Would Riverfall be here!? Then, he spotted the silver/gray tabby pelt, and padded over to her.

"Hey. I see you got back to your clan safely."

Riverfal shot him a glare to stay quiet, and looked around to see if anyone had heard. She flicked her ear, telling him to follow. She padded a little bit away from the crowd, and turned to him.

"What do you want Foxsong?"

Foxsong looked at the ground.

"I just wanted to talk..."

Riverfall sighed.

"Foxsong, I know it's more then that. I know you like me, and I like you."

Foxsong pricked his ears at this statement.

"But it won't work Foxsong! I'm from SageClan, and you're from MoonClan. It's against the warrior code."

Foxsong sighed, and was about to speak, when the leader's yowled for attention. He whispered.

"Just... meet me here tomorrow night, at Moon-High.!"

Foxsong saw Riverfall start to shake her head.

"Please!? Please Riverfall."

The she-cat looked away then nodded.

"Fine."

She got up, an stalked away. Foxsong smiled in victory, before slipping away back to his clan also.

::---::

 Foxsong padded through the territory. The Moon hung high in the sky. Will she come!? Will she be there?

He hadn't needed to worry, because when he got there, Riverfall was waiting. he wanted to yowl with happiness.

"You came!"

He purred.

"Foxsong. I told you this can't work!"

Foxsong shook his head.

"It will. It can. Please!"

Riverfall hung her head, and Foxsong took a step towards her, and licked her forehead. She looked at Foxsong, then smiled.

"Well, while we have this night..."

She then nipped his shoulder, and raced away, with Foxsong in hot pursuit...

::---::

He padded into camp. It was almost Dawn, and getting brighter. He slipped into camp through the Dirt-Place tunnel before slipping into the Warriors Den. He curled up, and fell asleep, his thoughts happy. Riverfall had agreed to meet him again in a Quarter Moon. So what if we're breaking the Warrior Code... So what....

Then, Foxsong was in a forest covered with blood. His eyes snapped open as gaping jaws appeared in front of him. He sat up, his eyes wild. He was the only one in the den, and it was nearing Sun-High. Foxsong spoke to himself.

"That dream... Does it mean something?"

Saturday, July 24, 2010

Chapter Four- Songs

Foxsong was crouched in the forest. His mouth was slightly open, testing for prey. Then, his ears pricked forward, and he leaped. There was a small squeak, before silence lapped over the forest once more. He raised his head and looked around, sniffing the air. Snow had started to fall, and the land was covered in white. He shook some snow off of him, before heading over to some tree roots. there Foxsong dug up a few pieces of prey, then headed back to camp.

Foxsong hadn't seen Riverfall since that night. It was almost the Gathering though, and maybe he would see her there! He walked into camp, when suddenly Wolfstar burst out of his den. His eyes were wild with pain. Then, a blinding light appeared in Foxsong's eyes, but before that happened, he saw Wolfstar collapse, then he felt his own body fall to the ground....

Foxsong woke up to whiteness. He blinked several times, and looked around, but all he saw was white. Sparkly white. He saw a few things, but barely anything. Foxsong shook, then felt a pelt brush his side. He then heard Wolfstar.

"Foxsong... what can you see? I saw you collapse? All I hear is... ringing. I can barely heard my own voice."

Foxsong gulped, and tried to speak loud.

"W-white. I see white. And I can see a bit, but mostly white."

Wolfstar sighed.

"This is not good."

Foxsong tried to look around.

"Where are we? The medicine cat's den?"

Wolfstar shook his head, then spoke.

"No. My den. Do you know what this means?"

Foxsong shook his head. Then, he heard a voice. He felt Wolfstar stiffen beside him. The voice grew louder.

"Ears of the Wolf will hear the Songs lengthen, eyes of the Fox will see the Songs rise, as power over life shows, the Flames of death close, when all storm's start."

Foxsong looked at Wolfstar, though he couldn't see him.

"Wolfstar... did you... hear that?"

Wolfstar closed his eyes.

"Yes. I did. A prophecy."

Foxsong shuddered.

"This... this can not be good."

(Okay! I am bringing this blog BACK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I know. I had closed it, but guess what? I am going to START it again!!!!! :D I made a new header! And I'm going to make my own background soon! Hope you liked this chapter. ;) )