Saturday, June 27, 2009

Chapter Five-Risen

Wolfsong landed flat on Silver's face.Wolfsong started to claw at the wolves eyes.Then Silver howled in pain.He shook Wolfsong off and ran.With only one eye.The pack watched Silver run,howling in pain.They then ran too,knowing that if their leader was defeated,the whole pack was defeated.Wolfsong slowly got up and looked around.It seemed to be that all the clan that was left,were in the camp.Then Wolfsong heard the ringing.He looked at the huge hole in the wall of the camp.Then Fang flew in through the hole and grabbed Thrushpaw.

"This is what you get when you hurt our leader!"

There was a loud snap as Fang crushed Thrushpaw with his powerful jaws.Then he threw Thrushpaw up in the air,opened his mouth,and let Thrushpaw fall in to his open mouth.Then Fang swallowed.Thrushpaw was gone.Wolfsong had had enough of this.His eyes were full of anger and power.While Fang spit out the bones of poor Thushpaw,Wolfsong threw himself at Fangs throat.

"Now this is what you get for killing our clan!"

Wolfsong bit down hard on Fangs throat.Blood started to poor out fast.Fang collapsed and was still.Wolfsong let go of Fang's destroyed throat and turned around.The clan were cowering in fear.In fear of Wolfsong.They had never known a cat could kill a huge wolf.Swallowpond then looked at the sky.

"StarClan have spoken.The new leader has risen!"

The clan slowly started to calm down and started to chant Wolfsong's name.Quietly at first but then so loud that the whole forest could probably hear them.Wolfsong stood,in shock,staring around the devastated clearing.He did not even hear the clan chanting.The only sound that he could hear was his family.Chanting his name.He closed his eyes,but when he opened them,they were shining,with happiness and fear.

"Is it really me you want as your leader!"

10 comments:

  1. I have 3 words for you:

    Oh....
    My....
    Gosh........

    AWESOME!!

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  2. Thanks Shadowfur.And in LakeClan is it okay if your name wasn't Creamfur.But maybe something like Cloudfur,Whitefur,Icefur,Willowfur,Mistyfur,or something like that.I put you down as Willowfur for now.But you can change it.

    Dreamstar

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  3. Foxspirit and GrassheartJune 29, 2009 at 12:27 PM

    AAAWWWEEESSSOOOMMMEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


    That is the best story i have ever read!!! it is sooo good, mine is nothing compared to that!

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  4. Thanks.It is going to be hard of what the next chapter will be...


    Dreamstar

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  5. I'm sure you'll manage. You did so well in the first 5 chapters.
    -Cloverpond

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  6. You could do it from the wolves point of veiw and have them plot the revenge for killing fang.

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  7. I think that is a good idea for a chapter or two Shinestar.Thanks!

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  8. So much killing. Will it stop? Why thrushpaw?

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